I Can't

i hav send dis story for a 100 word story kompetition....plzz tell me ur views guys.....

' why can't you come? '
 ' i've got my flying tomorrow, have to prepare for it. '
 ' that's not an exam !', zara mumbled.
' no, but i can't perform bad, it's my life honey. ' i tried to convince her.
' it's prom night, you fool.'
' zara, please understand, i just can't. ' she didn't say anything. the silence was killing me.
 ' i'll make up for it, i promise. '
 ' forget it. '
' i mean it. ' i could sense the storm approaching.
' please come.' my heart reached a new low, but my aviator instinct cautioned to stay clear of the storm.
' i love you. '
' bye. '
' i'll miss you' , she kept the receiver down.

THE END